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Objective

First of all, I'm sorry for this long post, I know everyone must be tired and exhausted from the past days, I'm really exhausted myself from what's going on prose along with many things. I really wanted to make it short comment on one of your posts but I didn't find a way to do so. So bear with me :)

Obviously! The things has been tense lately. Most of us got overwhelmed since S&S announcement and we allowed ourselves to drift with our emotions, which is fine, we are humans after all, and maybe a little bit more emotional than others, which is beautiful.

But here is the thing, don't let your emotions take over you all the time, don't let it mislead your judgments. I know there's a lot of questions mark about S&S and it is our right to ask questions and expect clear-honest answers. But, my fellow prosers and friends, my prose family, don't get drifted along with the tide, you might be wise but allow me to say, you're not being objective and went to mixing things up, and now I hear people talking about packing up and stuff. If there's any technical issue be patience, ask questions properly, and most importantly! have an insight into the issue.

I didn't want to mention this but to set an example I'll tell you. I was created a challenge 5 days ago but for some technical issues it was never posted until today, but I knew it must be temporary technical issue and with all the other technical issues along with S&S challenge I knew that they were working on something. Therefore, I waited some hours before I emailed them and they respond, even though days past and the challenge not up yet, but I waited! Because I knew they are working. Maybe they're not well experienced with literature judgment, maybe they did mistakes. I even imagine how they were overwhelmed by the challenge besides other stuff. But I still believe that they are honest ones with good intentions, and prose means to them more than just a business. But they also humans and they are learning things as well as so many of us included myself.

I don't need to tell you this but if you know me well, then you probably know that I would be the first to step up and open my big mouth, which I did regarding the challenge right after I recived the email, but sometimes it is unnecessary to share your thoughts, that's why I kept it to myself. And I'm not defending prose, yes, I love prose just like you do, more or less, but I'm just being objective here, I'm being fair and honest. I believe that they did mistakes and will do some more, and this is the part where you show your insightful by sorting out the honest mistakes from the intentional ones, and also to show off what you were made of in the hard times.

I worked for my father most of my life and god knows what I been through to build up his business, but he wasn't so grateful or maybe he had something in mind when he tends to forgetting everything I did for him for just a little "mistake" and trust me friend, it is such a bad feelings. 

Be patience guys, and don't mix things up, be more specific.

Don't give up at the first glitch.

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Objective
First of all, I'm sorry for this long post, I know everyone must be tired and exhausted from the past days, I'm really exhausted myself from what's going on prose along with many things. I really wanted to make it short comment on one of your posts but I didn't find a way to do so. So bear with me :)

Obviously! The things has been tense lately. Most of us got overwhelmed since S&S announcement and we allowed ourselves to drift with our emotions, which is fine, we are humans after all, and maybe a little bit more emotional than others, which is beautiful.

But here is the thing, don't let your emotions take over you all the time, don't let it mislead your judgments. I know there's a lot of questions mark about S&S and it is our right to ask questions and expect clear-honest answers. But, my fellow prosers and friends, my prose family, don't get drifted along with the tide, you might be wise but allow me to say, you're not being objective and went to mixing things up, and now I hear people talking about packing up and stuff. If there's any technical issue be patience, ask questions properly, and most importantly! have an insight into the issue.

I didn't want to mention this but to set an example I'll tell you. I was created a challenge 5 days ago but for some technical issues it was never posted until today, but I knew it must be temporary technical issue and with all the other technical issues along with S&S challenge I knew that they were working on something. Therefore, I waited some hours before I emailed them and they respond, even though days past and the challenge not up yet, but I waited! Because I knew they are working. Maybe they're not well experienced with literature judgment, maybe they did mistakes. I even imagine how they were overwhelmed by the challenge besides other stuff. But I still believe that they are honest ones with good intentions, and prose means to them more than just a business. But they also humans and they are learning things as well as so many of us included myself.

I don't need to tell you this but if you know me well, then you probably know that I would be the first to step up and open my big mouth, which I did regarding the challenge right after I recived the email, but sometimes it is unnecessary to share your thoughts, that's why I kept it to myself. And I'm not defending prose, yes, I love prose just like you do, more or less, but I'm just being objective here, I'm being fair and honest. I believe that they did mistakes and will do some more, and this is the part where you show your insightful by sorting out the honest mistakes from the intentional ones, and also to show off what you were made of in the hard times.

I worked for my father most of my life and god knows what I been through to build up his business, but he wasn't so grateful or maybe he had something in mind when he tends to forgetting everything I did for him for just a little "mistake" and trust me friend, it is such a bad feelings. 

Be patience guys, and don't mix things up, be more specific.
Don't give up at the first glitch.
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Goddammit! Did not expect that!

Hahaha, did you guys see the email for S&S results? Ugh, I didn't win, they said based on blank, blank and grammar, huh? NVM brah, I'm good :) well, just wanted to say... HARDLUCK ZOMBIESSS ^_^ 

Congratulations to all the winners!! Shooting in the air, Boom! Boom! Boom! ^_^

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Goddammit! Did not expect that!
Hahaha, did you guys see the email for S&S results? Ugh, I didn't win, they said based on blank, blank and grammar, huh? NVM brah, I'm good :) well, just wanted to say... HARDLUCK ZOMBIESSS ^_^ 

Congratulations to all the winners!! Shooting in the air, Boom! Boom! Boom! ^_^
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Deal With the Devil
Written by CreativeChaos in portal Fiction

Devils' Dance

Come.

Dance with me

I'll teach you new moves

As we dance

I'll sing you a song...

Darling little devil

Darling little devil

Do you know what love is?

Love is a condition

You live for it

Or die by its

But you have a revision

Like driving a car in reverse 

I do not lie

My word is a sword

Cut through 

But does not die

No, No

Don't play with me

Don't even try

I don't give false hope

So don't spit in my mouth

You told me let's wander

And I said sorry, 

It's out of my hand

I showed you where I live

And how I die

You knew where I land

Oh, wait-

Yes! I lie

I lie once a day

When someone asks me

How I'm doing? 

I answer; just fine

Yes, I lie

When someone 

Looks in my eyes

I fake a smile

Yes, I lie

I lie once a day

Darling little devil

Darling little devil

Do you know what love is?

You told me once you've loved

Yes, you've loved

You loved the past

You loved the present 

And left the clock on the wall

Ticking. . .

You told me the story

About this...

And...

You told me things-

We were good friends

And when I saw you sinking

In-your-own-blood

I gave you my hand

But-

Oops... my hand's bleeding now

Looks like I've trusted another

Human, again

And my kindness

Turned on me in pain

Again!

Darling little devil

Let me tell you a little story-

Once upon a time:

When I was a little kid

I went to the church every Sunday

And one of the Sundays

Fortunately!

I was just got out of the church

After they taught us the lesson

Of the day- love...

And told us the story about 

The rich man who gave away

Everything

And followed the

Word

At the end of the day

They gave everyone an apple

While I'm on my way home

I found a homeless

And I didn't have money

But I remembered the lesson

So I gave him the apple

It was all I had...

An apple-

Not a piece 

Not a half

But the whole

Now I have grown- Deeper

And I've become 

A homeless, too!

And an angel gave me

An apple

So I kept it!

For I'm a homeless 

Sorry...

I don't have apples 

To give away

I am a homeless

Not a farmer!

And don't curse at the angels 

Or you will get burned in hell

Even though they forgive sinners 

But karma is a bitch, right?

And does not forgive

When it comes to justice

Darling little devil,

Love is an art

Drew by artists

Colored with honesty

If you really an artist

Don't take an apple from homeless

To draw it on your panel

And make an art out of it

But leave it to him to survive 

His homelessness 

#499words #devilishpinch 

(Jesus will return soon to continue his original work)

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Deal With the Devil
Written by CreativeChaos in portal Fiction
Devils' Dance
Come.
Dance with me
I'll teach you new moves
As we dance
I'll sing you a song...

Darling little devil
Darling little devil
Do you know what love is?
Love is a condition
You live for it
Or die by its
But you have a revision
Like driving a car in reverse 

I do not lie
My word is a sword
Cut through 
But does not die
No, No
Don't play with me
Don't even try

I don't give false hope
So don't spit in my mouth
You told me let's wander
And I said sorry, 
It's out of my hand
I showed you where I live
And how I die
You knew where I land

Oh, wait-
Yes! I lie
I lie once a day
When someone asks me
How I'm doing? 
I answer; just fine
Yes, I lie
When someone 
Looks in my eyes
I fake a smile
Yes, I lie
I lie once a day

Darling little devil
Darling little devil
Do you know what love is?
You told me once you've loved
Yes, you've loved
You loved the past
You loved the present 
And left the clock on the wall
Ticking. . .

You told me the story
About this...
And...
You told me things-
We were good friends
And when I saw you sinking
In-your-own-blood
I gave you my hand

But-
Oops... my hand's bleeding now
Looks like I've trusted another
Human, again
And my kindness
Turned on me in pain
Again!

Darling little devil
Let me tell you a little story-

Once upon a time:
When I was a little kid
I went to the church every Sunday
And one of the Sundays
Fortunately!
I was just got out of the church
After they taught us the lesson
Of the day- love...
And told us the story about 
The rich man who gave away
Everything
And followed the
Word
At the end of the day
They gave everyone an apple

While I'm on my way home
I found a homeless
And I didn't have money
But I remembered the lesson
So I gave him the apple
It was all I had...
An apple-
Not a piece 
Not a half
But the whole

Now I have grown- Deeper
And I've become 
A homeless, too!
And an angel gave me
An apple
So I kept it!
For I'm a homeless 

Sorry...
I don't have apples 
To give away
I am a homeless
Not a farmer!

And don't curse at the angels 
Or you will get burned in hell
Even though they forgive sinners 
But karma is a bitch, right?
And does not forgive
When it comes to justice

Darling little devil,
Love is an art
Drew by artists
Colored with honesty

If you really an artist
Don't take an apple from homeless
To draw it on your panel
And make an art out of it
But leave it to him to survive 
His homelessness 

#499words #devilishpinch 

(Jesus will return soon to continue his original work)
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Lonely vs Alone
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Feels & Things

 

Lonelywhen you be among people but feels like you're the only.

Alone: when you be in the bathroom or do things on your own.

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Feels & Things
 

Lonelywhen you be among people but feels like you're the only.
Alone: when you be in the bathroom or do things on your own.
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You Are

You are my weekness 

You are my pain and happiness 

You are my world and the whole universe 

You are all I want, you are all I want to embrace 

You are my weakness and sadness, and you are.. definitely, my happiness. 

You are the blood in my veins and my whole universe. You are- the universe. 

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You are my weekness 
You are my pain and happiness 
You are my world and the whole universe 
You are all I want, you are all I want to embrace 
You are my weakness and sadness, and you are.. definitely, my happiness. 
You are the blood in my veins and my whole universe. You are- the universe. 
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In-between

Her name blue

Her eyes green

And I lost in between 

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In-between
Her name blue
Her eyes green
And I lost in between 
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Reasons

        Reason to depart                    Reason to love                         Reason to write

            Reason to meet                      Reason to suffer                       Reason to read

 

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Reasons
        Reason to depart                    Reason to love                         Reason to write
            Reason to meet                      Reason to suffer                       Reason to read

 
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Meet Me

I'm the bird in the sky

I'm the sorrow in the broken heart

I'm the bravery in coward world

I'm the truth when they lie

I'm the homeless at your door

I'm the lover! 

I'm the wine in your glass

I'm the sap in the trees

I'm the blood in your veins

I'm the ink on your page

I'm the tears on your checks 

I'm the lover!

I'm the lover!

I AM- the lover!

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Meet Me


I'm the bird in the sky
I'm the sorrow in the broken heart
I'm the bravery in coward world
I'm the truth when they lie
I'm the homeless at your door
I'm the lover! 
I'm the wine in your glass
I'm the sap in the trees
I'm the blood in your veins
I'm the ink on your page
I'm the tears on your checks 
I'm the lover!
I'm the lover!
I AM- the lover!
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Tower

"The pain doesn't go away. You just make room for it."

-the walking dead

I've made a whole tower for it ^_^

-the dead me

#room #tower #pain #bitter-sarcasm 

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Tower
"The pain doesn't go away. You just make room for it."
-the walking dead

I've made a whole tower for it ^_^
-the dead me
#room #tower #pain #bitter-sarcasm 
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Why so serious?
Written by CreativeChaos in portal Comedy

Fucker

You know what?

Fuck you

Fuck you and him and her and them

Fuck my heart

Fuck my boiling blood

Fuck the Queen and fuck the Prince

Fuck England 

Fuck U.S. 

And fuck Egypt too

Fuck you 

Fuck mathematics and science

Fuck the high cost and low price

Fuck my cat 

Fuck my pant

And fuck my Nike shoes too

Fuck you 

Fuck money and fuck my debts

Fuck likes and comments 

Fuck facebook

Fuck twitter 

And fuck my toothpaste too

Fuck you

Fuck humans and fuck humanity 

Fuck love and fuck knowledge 

Fuck education 

Fuck my college

And fuck my math professor too 

Fuck you

I fuck you and fuck anything else

I fuck all objects on planet earth 

I fuck mental, spirit, and the whole universe 

I fuck you again and fuck the subway train

And if you don't like my attitude 

You can fuck me too

If that will improve your mood

#apathy #randomness

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Why so serious?
Written by CreativeChaos in portal Comedy
Fucker
You know what?
Fuck you
Fuck you and him and her and them
Fuck my heart
Fuck my boiling blood
Fuck the Queen and fuck the Prince
Fuck England 
Fuck U.S. 
And fuck Egypt too
Fuck you 
Fuck mathematics and science
Fuck the high cost and low price
Fuck my cat 
Fuck my pant
And fuck my Nike shoes too
Fuck you 
Fuck money and fuck my debts
Fuck likes and comments 
Fuck facebook
Fuck twitter 
And fuck my toothpaste too
Fuck you
Fuck humans and fuck humanity 
Fuck love and fuck knowledge 
Fuck education 
Fuck my college
And fuck my math professor too 
Fuck you
I fuck you and fuck anything else
I fuck all objects on planet earth 
I fuck mental, spirit, and the whole universe 
I fuck you again and fuck the subway train
And if you don't like my attitude 
You can fuck me too
If that will improve your mood

#apathy #randomness
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