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i miss you (haiku)
Tell me about what it's like to miss someone who wasn't yours to miss. Tag me - I look forwards to you all breaking my heart
Ended May 15, 2020 • 51 Entries • Created by Riley_45
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i miss you (haiku)
Tell me about what it's like to miss someone who wasn't yours to miss. Tag me - I look forwards to you all breaking my heart
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ddullahan in Haiku
• 58 reads

void

your absence echoes like

bitter words and caustic dreams.

i haven't slept since.

#haiku #longing

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i miss you (haiku)
Tell me about what it's like to miss someone who wasn't yours to miss. Tag me - I look forwards to you all breaking my heart
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AtoZ in Haiku
• 59 reads

I’m sorry

I know I broke you

but I miss our cosmic love.

I'm sorry, come back.

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i miss you (haiku)
Tell me about what it's like to miss someone who wasn't yours to miss. Tag me - I look forwards to you all breaking my heart
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Taliesin in Haiku
• 72 reads

Phantom

The sound of your voice

Images of you in dreams

Haunt my empty nights

~Taliesin

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i miss you (haiku)
Tell me about what it's like to miss someone who wasn't yours to miss. Tag me - I look forwards to you all breaking my heart
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Danceinsilence in Haiku
• 108 reads

Missing

I miss too many,

those who past me by, unknown,

a friend never made.

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i miss you (haiku)
Tell me about what it's like to miss someone who wasn't yours to miss. Tag me - I look forwards to you all breaking my heart
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AmericanNomad in Haiku
• 44 reads

Frozen in Memory

Like a winter wind

Your cold eyes pierced through my soul

Yet I miss their warmth

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i miss you (haiku)
Tell me about what it's like to miss someone who wasn't yours to miss. Tag me - I look forwards to you all breaking my heart
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Bo_Evoletii in Haiku
• 45 reads

the only person I can’t have

I still will love you

the only thing is I

wish you’d say it back

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i miss you (haiku)
Tell me about what it's like to miss someone who wasn't yours to miss. Tag me - I look forwards to you all breaking my heart
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querencia in Haiku
• 28 reads

Goodbye

Regret consumes me,

but to stay was to succumb.

I had to leave you.

* * *

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i miss you (haiku)
Tell me about what it's like to miss someone who wasn't yours to miss. Tag me - I look forwards to you all breaking my heart
Blanche in Haiku
• 38 reads

I miss you

Whispering your name

Calling out through the silence

Swallowed by the void

I miss you

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i miss you (haiku)
Tell me about what it's like to miss someone who wasn't yours to miss. Tag me - I look forwards to you all breaking my heart
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Grandiflorus in Haiku
• 23 reads

Alone

You left me like this—

Dried plant on your window sill,

Don't you miss me still?

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i miss you (haiku)
Tell me about what it's like to miss someone who wasn't yours to miss. Tag me - I look forwards to you all breaking my heart
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TomLeah in Haiku
• 94 reads

Drowning in Silence

Drowning in silence,

A few words bubbling from you

Will delay our death.

I think the rhythm of the first line is awkward, which is perhaps apt. The language is perhaps too metaphorical and the air bubble not clear enough in the Haiku. In otherwise, perfect!

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