Challenge
Do the double tanka with me! Two stanzas, five lines each, 5-7-5-7-7 syllable form each stanza (see my "Bonkers" for something of an example). Tag me, if you please! #doubletanka
Not of angels
D'Angelo's angels
In downtown Alicante.
Euphemistically
A club where
final hopes end
If such hopes
were entertained.
It's not of angels
That place of
endless pillars,
Wings and opulence
Where ladies
dance in plenty
And Hell's grisly
chorus sings.
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