Challenge
Hey everyone. As some of you are aware not only do I post reviews on Prose, but I also have been writing a whole series for about a year now titled Sins of the Father. I kinda want to get everyone's honest opinion on how I'm doing with the series so far. Do you find it entertaining or blasphemous? Anything that needs improving? How are the characters? Which stories have you enjoyed so far? Share your thoughts. You can find complete stories on my profile page or PM me and I can send you links.
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I find it very entertaining reading. The characters are distinct and they get into inventive situations and interactions. I don't think it's very blasphemous to show a Lucifer with faith issues. It's less outrageous than most American sitcoms. The family life is shown very touchingly.
One thing I have noticed writing long form on Prose is you don't get as many views as the poets. You're doing a great job with the series and I hope you keep at it.
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