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Famous First Words: Write a great opening line to a novel.
Ended August 6, 2017 • 181 Entries • Created by desmondwrite
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Famous First Words: Write a great opening line to a novel.
Breaking all Boundaries
Okay listen carefully, there is a character in this book who is trying to kill you, and yes by 'you' I mean the reader, but don't worry, I'm going to help you survive this; I was once on your side of the page after all.
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MissChanelleJoy
Love it! So creative =D I'd read the shit out of that novel haha XD

TaiSensei
@ChanelleJoy bwahahaha tsank you, I'll let you know when my novel is finished. It won't start like this, (or have a murderous character trying to kill you) but it will have something similar....in a 4-dimention kind of way

star_catcherx
Ohhhhh suspense! Heh hope I don't get killed!

TaiSensei
@XxFwuffyBunnyxX don't worry, the MC is "going to help you survive this" >:D

desmondwrite
Super meta!

desmondwrite
With an opening like this, I would definitely read this book.

TaiSensei
@desmondwrite Tsank you :D I'm considering actually starting a book like this now.

desmondwrite
Do it! And tag me for each chapter if you post them to prose!

TaiSensei
@desmondwrite haha XD okei, I'll make a note right now, thanx for your early support :)

Chacko_Stephen
*deepening voice with a dark background music* But what if you fail? Haha, just getting a little cinematic ^-^

TaiSensei
@Chacko_Stephen oh snap!!! what a killer plot twist! (literally haha)

Chacko_Stephen
Haha, lol. I just imagined if it happens for real :)

Carissa
Amazing haha, But there's ganna be more right

TaiSensei
@Carissa I love to break the 4th wall, but I'm not sure I could pull this off just yet, haha. I'm working on other stories though (that may or may not break some boundaries) but I think I gotta train up before tackling this specific one

Carissa
But this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good

TaiSensei
@Carissa XD lmao omgawsh, thank you!!! I have a flash fiction similar to this that you would definitely love, but I've been trying to get it published so I can't post it here. If it works out, I'll be sure to let you know though :D

Carissa
Thanks @TaiSensei