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Describe the feeling of physical pain WITHOUT using these words(listed in the description)
don't use these: suffering, agony, torment, blood, bruise, cut, pain, sting, burn, discomfort, throbbing, pang, stab, cut, ouch, cry, scream. any form- poetry or prose.
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Crimsonrose
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A Feeling.

Sounds become a buzz in the ear

A room that holds no air

Gasping for a breath

But it evades the senses

A mind that has lost its reason

Encompassed completely with suffocation

The heart churning inside

Beating so fast as if it would explode

Lungs striving for air

As if a thousand breaths would not be enough

Limbs shaking so bad

They just might cumble at any moment

Eyes filled with a torrent of fluid

Even now it might wreak havoc

Body now so weak as if a hundred years old

Such that it was a slave to that something

That no one can ever grab or hold.

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