take your time
between my fibers
your words feel like heartbeats
sentences building up to a pulse
a certain shiver when lips touch
a scorching fire when hands shift and move
ready to explore the unknown ground
imprinting on my skin
and leaving a mark
the only pain of mine
that always feels so good
a casual bruise
set in the heart
***
anarosewood
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f1fLFWxCCbI
tooldtocare
@anarosewood This is really vivid. I feel a longing inside when I read it like there is something that I am either missing or forgot about. It's kind of disturbing actually.
anarosewood
disturbing you say? well, for me as a writer, it sure sounds like a compliment, but I do get what you're saying, sometimes people write such things that I just... no words, no words, just emotions, and feelings, you know? @tooldtocare
tooldtocare
@anarosewood I do know and I think you do a wonderful job stirring up emotion in your pieces and I am gad you took it as a compliment.
anarosewood
I did, a great compliment ;) well, I do enjoy stirring up emotions... in writings, of course... ;p @tooldtocare
Danceinsilence
@anarosewood ... what can I say other than you have struck gold again with this, a very deep, emotional outburst from a bruised heart ... 8=)
anarosewood
thank you @Brandi333 ;)
anarosewood
thank you so much @Danceinsilence =)
Mnezz
I took my time as I read this. Reading it from beginning to end, and then from the last line to the first. Amazing write & song @anarosewood :-)
anarosewood
wow, thank you so much @Mnezz :D
Mnezz
Any time for sure @anarosewood :D
MidnightInk
I’m in no rush, I’ll take my time to devour all. Feeling every inch and every line, As i explore,the depth of your soul.
anarosewood
goodness, the smoothness never ends... @MidnightInk