Mon Bien-aimé

Jared took a deep breath and looked in the mirror. He stroked his chin, & stood for a little while staring at his reflection. A voice called out his name: ‘‘Jared.’’ It was almost a whisper, he thought it was just in his head.

(*gasps* Oh no. Who/what could be calling him?)

He turned around and scratched his head. But his reflection had not changed, and it was looking at his back side.

(Whoa! What in the world is coming after him? Jared, I think you either need to find a place to hide, or face whatever is after you~ eish. This is really bad. I wonder how this is going to end.)

Jared walked away from the mirror and left his bathroom. He rushed to check if there was someone at the front door.

(Hmm, where is this going now?)

The second he shut the door, something knocked him out and he landed on the ground. Jared felt his body being dragged and tossed onto a couch.

(Okay. Who’s after him~ is it his reflection, or something else?!)

When he opened his eyes, he met two wide eyes staring at him. Jared sat right up and shook his head. This didn’t make any sense.

(Eh. What’s going on? Oh, tell me who/what it is? Come on. I need more details. *sighs*)

Jared fell to his knees and could not stop the tears from flowing. ‘‘How are you here? I thought you were...gone..’’

(Er, who? Did someone die, or get killed?)

The moment he tried to touch her face, his hands phased through her body. This made him even feel much worse. His beloved was back, sadly, she wasn’t human anymore.

(I see. *nods* Poor guy, but what is she doing coming after him & scaring him like this. Uh.)

Jared noticed how her skin had changed. It was not the same as before. Her eyes were lost, wandering about. Even her face was not looking bright. She looked grey, and seemed to be missing something.

(Interesting details. Still, what does she want from him? Omg, no. I think I know where this is going. *gulps*)

She blinked and then she started to change. Jared backed away from her in panic. Her hands reached out to him like a flood of black feathers. He waved his hands, trying to fight for his life. It was all in vain!

(Ah, well, I guess it’s over.)

Jared concentrated and focused his mind. He mumbled some words & a portal opened. A blinding light broke through the portal and wrapped itself around Jared’s guest.

(Wha- o~ Jared has powers? Why did he wait this long to use them? *laughs*)

The light trap pulled her away, and she was sent back to the netherworld. Jared screamed. He would have to find a way to get her back. She had saved him from ending up in that place. He had to find a way to save his beloved, before it was too late.

(I think I’m going to need some time to recover from the ending. Tough decision right there. How is he going to save her?

Hey, where’s the rest of the story. Mm, I’ll have to wait for the next episode/part. Fine.)

The End—

(No way! It can’t be.)

-For now.

(Lol, that’s better. The story better be continued soon. My boy, Jared, needs to be reunited with his beloved. Anyway, not a bad story/beginning.)

#MonBien-aimé ©

dimanche, 6 octobre, 2019.