Challenge
WTIYOS
I saw wabisabi post a challenge like this on prose and I thought it was cool. In this version of the challenge you would take one of my poems and write it in your own style. You can do a total overhaul or just change a few things, whatever you want! My poetry isn't very good so this might be lame, but I hope you like this challenge.
proximity*
dark.
i never thought the arms of
death
would be so warm;
nor its strong embrace,
so
comforting.
i never thought of falling,
drowning in it’s
siren sound, but
now that i can
a l m o s t
feel it,
i am
no longer
afraid.
*inspired by the original poem ‘Proximity’ by Luthien.
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