Challenge
Write about your vices in metaphors
We all have weaknesses, a dark side, vices. Write about it as metaphors. What do they feel like to you? Drowning? Falling? Locked in chains? Try to represent these feelings in the physical world. Any format of writing & please tag me. And remember that no suffering has to happen alone. We're here for you. <3
sand
Quicksand
and I can't move fast enough
Slowly, dragging my feet through
heavy thoughts and idle dreams
forget it
the trees above whisper
as they cackle with their shaking leaves
Sin
king
and the sand is filling my mouth
Let me speak but all I find is gritty
debris from my own head that
poured out when I screamed and
now I can't find the strength to
wade through
so all I can do
is
s
i
n
k
as I let the sand cover my eyes
surrounded by weathered desires
and denied ambitions
crushed and turned to this
dusty sand
that covers my head
and buries my bones
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