Challenge
Rewrite
Rewrite one of my pieces, from the oldest or the newest, into your style, a new perspective, or add something to it. Include what you choose to rewrite in your submission.
Music never dies
hearts do many wonders
they pump
mystic music
and allow others to
play our heartstrings
like a guitar.
hearts do many wonders
and mine
speaks
melodies
in my sleep
softly whispering words
to make my mind at ease.
hearts do many wonders
but you plucked my strings too hard
and you poured poison through my ear
so now all I hear are
melancholy mutterings
of “you're worthless”
drowing out
the sweet sounds
of my heart.
it whispers
“please
stop listening to those words inside your head.
i am not broken
for i still have sweet songs
begging to be heard.
please
let me do wonders.”
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