Challenge Ended
Limit yourself to only one syllable per word and only five words per line
have fun with it. don't forget to tag me
Ended January 3, 2021 • 21 Entries • Created by darknight
Challenge
Limit yourself to only one syllable per word and only five words per line
have fun with it. don't forget to tag me
My turn to fly..
The night has set in,
stars too shy to glow;
The world's set to die,
but, for now, for once-
it's my turn to fly.
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VividHues
@darknight Fun challenge!
VividHues
Tried something different from my usual style here. I'd love to know what you guys think :) @Chacko_Stephen @Danceinsilence @Moonsinger128 @nightscribbler @Mnezz @EstherFlowers1 @QuietSilence @Acadec56 @MidnightInk @ValiantRaptor @Voidkin_Killer @SanjanaS @snivyth3 @OceanofStorms @Parise_25 @dctezcan
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Danceinsilence
I think you done good @VividHues ... "Fly away, fly away, pretty butterfly ... fly away fly away, don't you cry ... fly away, fly away butterfly for we all one day will die ... fly away, fly away, perhaps I shall see you again one day."
VividHues
Wow @Danceinsilence that was beautiful. Thank you so much for the kind words and the like :)
nightscribbler
Ooh, this was so delicately beautiful! I love it. :) <3
Chacko_Stephen
Ah! I remember finding this challenge. My mind was just plain blank. To try would have been a nightmare (for me) XD It's just, I haven't really learnt how poetry works yet ^-^ But, you did a great job out of it. Truly brilliant, I shall say. It was beautiful. Especially the last two lines, they were simply just too good. I mean, the whole poem was. I loved it! Great job!
Acadec56
You're so amazing omg !
Mnezz
Wow! Awesome entry ^u^ ❤️
HandsOfFire
lovely piece!
VividHues
Thank you so much!! @nightcribbler And thanks for the L&R :)
VividHues
Hahaha @Chacko_Stephen Why dabble in poetry when you can write the way you do...your stories are just amazing! Thank you for your sweet words, and the L&R <3
VividHues
@EstherFlowers1 Ma'am, what you call nonsense had me in splits XD Thank you for your appreciation :)
VividHues
@Acadec56 Thank you for the kind words and the L&R :)
VividHues
Thanks a lot @Mnezz and thank you for the L&R :)
VividHues
Thank you so much! ^_^ @HandsOfFire Appreciate the L&R :)
VividHues
Thanks a lot for the likes :) @dctezcan @darknight @Voidkin_Killer @KassKatt @asterisk
poetgreen
Yes, fly on!! I love this!!
Mnezz
Any time @VividHues! :)
Chacko_Stephen
Aww, you are so kind ^-^ Thank you! But, I will try poetry one day, I think, I hope ^-^
OceanOfStorms
I love this!!!!