Challenge
Hook Me
Write the best hook to the beginning of a novel. Must start with the words "As my world burned...". No longer than three sentences. Tag me!
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Phoenix
As my world burned, I could not help but wonder what would rise from the ashes. Yes, my nightmare was over: He was dead, his bloody carcass buried amongst the flames. But, as I turned to merge with the shadows, I still gripped the knife in my hand.