Challenge
Hook Me
Write the best hook to the beginning of a novel. Must start with the words "As my world burned...". No longer than three sentences. Tag me!
i’d give you the world
as my world burned, her eyes passed over the ruins with disinterest. "blah blah protocol, would you like to join our cause for the great and holy pain-in-the-ass greater god?"
my god, i thought with dying vision, i'm in hell.
"it's too much work destroying worlds on my own," the other girl said. "join me."
so i did.
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