The Bloody Zaphold Line
Please take into account this is my first rough draft for this chapter, please give feedback and what you want to see more, and I will improve it.
Part two
231 of the new galactic calendar. Of the intergalactic stationarity calendar 13.7 billion.
It’s been four years since my mother passed away I have no recollection of exactly how it happened the detectives never could find the killer so I went with the fact that maybe she killed herself it was Pam Prince of hers on the ninth but she must’ve done something some crazy training to stab yourself in the back I guess all the time that’s past maybe she did that yourself in the back. But I don’t know. I guess what I’m trying to say is I didn’t take over the company, I left it in the capable hands of the five detectives call me in the corner searching for my father. I think we found a lead on the planet Javong this planet is a criminal paradise filled with cutthroat pirates deadly criminals and your worst nightmares slave trade here is all of the rage and it’s here where I will find my father‘s best friend Nikolai Roskin. Nikolai is a slave trader he traded in so many slaves that he’s up to his head in money quite literally from what I’ve been able to gather. His net income is roughly around 466 trillion United credits monthly I wouldn’t say that that’s a lot but when you have a monthly income of that I see he’s the richest man on the planet he sells roughly around 230 slaves a day taking Saturday and Sundays off of course. I decided to start here with my friend, the corner Nexion. We talked and it ended quite well. I think in the long time that we have been on this trail this is our first steady lead.
Now on to where we are in the very center of this place. The capital looks horrendous but most of all, I hate the smell. It smells like someone has died multiple times and shit themselves. I don't like it.
Aleca was standing in the very center of the square and all around her the men and even some women started to approach her thinking she was an easy game, but not realizing that the man she was waiting for was already in the cloud watching her. The buildings in this part of town were very high and smooched. What was scary wasn't the building but the point defense system owned by a private military company. The grass was no more and was just humps of blackened gray. Everything was either covered in filth or rotting away; nothing was properly built.
Miss Velion of the criminal gang black bears. Was standing the closest to the young lady and her escort thinking easy money she approached.
“Hello, my dear little princess, I'm wondering if you would like my help, hmm?”
The girl looked up at her don't talk but the man next to her did.
“I'm afraid we don't need your services. I think we can take it from here.”
Veilion didn't like that and persisted, but stopped mid-sentence.
“I'm sure that we could come to…”
The young girl had taken out a carbine 34-JH, a military-grade weapon, one which had a huge recoil and was not for weak people. It had a double barrel, was completely back and custom made. She guessed it must have been made directly in the factory and stolen. She could see the side so she knew not the name. But looking at those two barrels in front of her made her shake a little. like her and yet she was pointing it at velion.
She shut up and backed up but when the girl moved the gun to the front of her, she filed a bolt the weapon made a bizzt noise as it ricocheted off the sign in front of the young lady bounces off, and hits one of the defense cannons and climbs up higher and higher. Until there was a high-pitched scream.
“Aaarrrggghhh!!!”
Mis Velion heard a thud as she looted beside her one of her snipers was laying there dead. On the ground. She looked back at the lady to find she had come very close to her and was only a few centimeters in front of her.
“Aleca fired the bolt and as the criminals were preoccupied with that and where it was going she moved close to the miss. When the lady turned back she saw Aleca very close to her. And tried to back away but Nexion was behind her.
“I hope you don't mind little lady but I killed your sniper I can aim again and kill the other 5 up there belonging to the other gangs. like here of blackness, borner death, red blood, and slave bringer. Or you could all retreat with only one casualty and let me speak with Mr. Nikolai Roskin. Who is watching me? hmm? ”
Once they all heard the name Roskin they retreated. All of them except her, Velion stood their ground. And glared back or tried to because the young lady was staring her down. She turned her head and left.
Nikolai walked out and met the young lady inviting her back to his home. But before they entered she stopped and spoke.
“This is far enough, Nexion gives us some privacy.”
Nexion did just that. He killed all the surrounding men and women be they slaves or criminals leaving a trail of fresh blood and meat. Behind.
Nikolai was, for the first time in his life, scared of this child. No, this monster.
“Fine then m-miss A-A-Aleca let's talk.”
smiling like she was just given the keys to a brand new car she aimed the JH at him.
She replied
“Sounds good, meat bag. Sounds good.”