Challenge
Double Tanka Poetry Challenge
Using 10 lines and a syllable count of: 57577 & 57577, tell a story. Most creative/descriptive wins.
Jack in the box
Once upon a time.
There was a time i once knew.
Now I don't know Jack.
I think that was his real name.
He lived his days in a box.
Cardboard,and judged.
Handle with care.Feeble soul.
Once it held a bed.
Thermal packing.His quilt box.
So conveniently swindled.
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