Challenge
Write a piece of poetry or prose about losing your virginity. Winner will be judged not only on likes and comments, but on fire, form, and edge. The writer that kicks me in the teeth the hardest gets $200.
Gone
He'd done this plenty of times
Like a serial crime
To girls who thought they were supposed to feel a certain way,
Thought they were supposed to be a certain way
Touching me in a way I'd never been touched before
Saying, "It's okay."
To all of my, "I'm a little unsure(s)."
I didn't want to see him
And I didn't want to be seen by him
But he tossed my on the bed
Romantically trying to rip my clothes off
My heart pounding
My nerves shaking
Like an animal on top
Hot skin with blood boiling
Taking its prey
Tearing into it's soul
With one thrust he tore
And that was it,
My Irreplaceable Element Robbed,
Gone
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