Challenge
Write about a friendship that has been slowly drifting apart. A friendship where on gave his/her 100% while the other barely tried to put efforts, where one understood the other with one glance of the face while the other couldn't distinguish the simplest emotions of the first one, where the first one cared less because s/he already has many other friends while the other one barely had anyone to depend upon. Cover all these aspects and write a poem filled with angst. See if I could feel the pain in your words. Don't forget to tag me~
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When You Came
When you came
Like the welcome breeze in Summer
When you came and spread your warmth and happiness
Into my life
When you came
Like a lion, full of courage
When you came
Like fire, and consumed me
I realised what I had been searching for
The sky was no longer a dead end
The road dust no more
And I not alone
You made you world like your words;
Sweet colours painting pretty pictures
You made the world like your mind;
A mystery, a brief delicacy
You were the door left ajar
To some unseen world.
When you came
I knew you would be my
Last line in this brave romance.
@AMY