Challenge
Poetic Form: The Pantoum. @sandflea68 suggested I post this challenge so we may try our hand at this form. Here is a little background on the style from poets.org: www.poets.org/poetsorg/text/pantoum-poetic-form . Please tag me in the comments, @PhynneBelle #pantoum
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I don't know what to say right now.
Lost for words? I know! It's odd,
I'm usually on top of things,
but not now. Where to go from here?
Lost! Forwards, I know. It's odd,
I'm usually so sure of things.
But not now. Where to go? From here
it's hazy, not too clear a view.
I'm usually so sure of things;
people say "He knows his shit".
It says: a knot to clear. A view's
what's needed to find a way to 'there'.
People say "He knows he's shit,
but - " "Not now!" Where to go from here?
What's needed? To find a way to their...
I don't know what to say right now.