Challenge
Find something that you wrote at least two years ago, embarrassing and cringey (to you), and post it. Show you're bravery! I will be doing so as well. But a twist! You must take this and revise it in another entry.
136 reads
Immortality
A pound of gold isnt as satisfying as a cup of water,
The effort inside can be enthusiastic but the pains are traumatic.
Forever and ever isn't the reciprocal of immortality,
Neither familiarity with love can make it immortal.
Longevity is a gift not a treasure,
Death resistance is never pills for eternity.
Moral doctrine is the only recipe for long life,
Quest for Trinity creates a trivial deities.
Immortality is a tale for Creators not creation.