Challenge
Poetic Form: The Pantoum. @sandflea68 suggested I post this challenge so we may try our hand at this form. Here is a little background on the style from poets.org: www.poets.org/poetsorg/text/pantoum-poetic-form . Please tag me in the comments, @PhynneBelle #pantoum
Slow Swing
Three lonely
Lovers are
There in an
Empty room.
Lovers are
Dreaming of
Empty room's
Sexiness,
Dreaming of
Fantasies,
Sexiness,
Otherness.
Fantasies
Keep for the
Otherness
Sacred place,
Keep for the
Lovers the
Sacred place
Of the dreams.
Lovers the
Roses, thorns
Of the dreams
Fondle in minds.
Roses, thorns
Bloom when they
Fondle in minds,
Become fierce.
Bloom when they
Are not to
Become fierce
From regrets,
Are not to
Make mistakes
From regrets
Of missed love.
Mistakes made
From bad luck
Of love missed.
They got lost
From bad luck:
Three lonely,...
They got lost
There in.
Three lonely
Lovers are
There in an
Empty room.
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