Challenge
This is a collaboration prompt. Offer up a piece (poem or flash fiction) to be revised by another person on prose. (you may tag your preferred revisers). I want to see both the original and the revised version(s)! (is this confusing? okay, first time I am posting a prompt here)
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Music
(open to revision by anyone)
Music makes life worth living
Music can do amazing things to us
Music has a soul that can bond with yours
Music can make you smile
Music can make you cry
Music can make you silent in awe
Music makes memories
Music is something no one can take away from you
Music can give the empty one's souls
There is no life without music and there is no music without life
There is no one without the other
Life is hard and cold
Music is escape and the fire of one’s soul