Challenge
Up In Smoke: Craft a shortstory, drabble, vignette, or poem that features, includes, or describes the act of smoking.
As a literary device, I love cigarettes. As a real-world item, I hate them. They stink. They're expensive. They're addictive.
In film or a piece of writing, though, they're silent characters with souls of their own. I love the smoky exhalation, the expectant inhale. I'm amazed at those white tendrils, reaching skyward, or the plume expelled into a face by an antagonist.
I love the words and images surrounding smoking.
We can twist the act any way we want. Build suspense. Create tension, or relieve it. Even find humor in the weakness of the addiction.
Let me see your spin on it.
Exhale
Dark, mysterious
Studded leather draped
Levis back pocket
Cancer stick escaped
His Marlboro pack
Stuck between those lips
Once supple now chapped
Yellowed fingers clip
Hair behind the ear
Stained teeth smile, flirt
Mystery eludes
My feet turn in dirt
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