Challenge
Drabble me this. 100 words of fiction. Not 99, not 101, not 847. One hundred words precisely.
100 words of fiction. Not 99, not 101, not 847. One hundred words precisely. On choosing the winner, I couldn't care less about popularity and likes. I care about the storytelling. With a good side dish of solid grammar and following the rules of sticking to a hundred words.
Almost Alone (a drabble)
"Abigail."
Her name was a barely audible whisper. Impossibly, she felt cold breath against warm neck; goosebumps were born the exact moment her comfort died.
Eyes locked closed and breath seized in her chest.
Such was the shock of fear that she didn't even notice the shampoo sting.
Logically, she knew that the bathroom was filled with hot steam, yet her skin was prickled by cold breath.
She remembered the door was locked tight.
She hoped that when her eyes opened, she'd be alone.
Stiffly, she rinsed, and looked, and was.
Almost.
Another whisper, her other ear.
“Abigail, come play.”
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