Challenge
Describe the feeling of physical pain WITHOUT using these words(listed in the description)
don't use these: suffering, agony, torment, blood, bruise, cut, pain, sting, burn, discomfort, throbbing, pang, stab, cut, ouch, cry, scream.
any form- poetry or prose.
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Pain
Your skin slices open
A dark red oozes out
There's a thrumming in your veins
It aches
pokes
and bites
Nipping at your nerves
Trembling under pressure
A sound emerges from your lips
Echoing in the open air
Affliction at its finest
Yet no one hears
It is just you
Lying in a pool of inky liquid
That was once in you
But now isn't
Apart of a life
Life leaking away