Challenge
Challenge of the Week LXXVIII
The element of surprise. Write a story or poem with a surprising ending.
The Blaze
It came like a flash flood
Pouring through the forest
Devouring everything in its path
Leaving ash in its wake
It seemed nothing could defeat it
It seemed nothing won against it
It started from a spark
Taking lives
Tearing families apart
Leaving tears behind
It seemed to be the worst nightmare
It seemed to be the end of it all
It burned bright and high
Dazzling hot white flames
Scorching the bottom of the aerial firefighter’s copter
Ending all hope of salvation
It seemed no one would come to the rescue
It seemed no one would survive
This blaze was bright
This blaze was hot
This blaze burned long
But as this blaze died out
New life was born
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