Challenge
Illusions of water
Use water as your driving metaphor, simile, force - just no literal waves
I’ll be reproving and reading all entries. So. No prize, but all of my followers will see your pieces, so sharing the love <3
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Mississippi
violent
a mass rush to a finish line that may not even exist,
or one you may cross at any given moment.
destructive
grasping desperatly at anything you shove by,
in you eagerness you fail to notice the pieces you leave behind.
helpless
at a point you're not sure of your movements,
there is never a moment of stillness in this chaotic current.
calm
a stillness does not mean there is no movement,
despite the lack of whitecaps you are moving forward in a moment of peace.
vast
the finish line that was promised was a lie,
it seems to be the entry to a larger adventure.