Challenge
show, don't tell
so I kind of stole this from my english teacher but its an exercise we did in class today.
Take these sentences: I was in the waiting room. I was nervous.
And rewrite it by describing what is happening. If you want an example I posted one on my account :)
Have fun!-I did
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Waiting on Serenity
Temple, resting on your breast
Paralyzed, I hold my breath
Seashell pressed against my ear
’Waiting waves of peace from fear
Quiet soul makes not a sound
Hush! Faint echoes soon resound
Temple’s sweet serenity
Found in silence before thee