Challenge
Challenge of the Week CXXXVIII
Unbelievable. Write about something that's hard to believe. Fiction or non-fiction, poetry or Prose.
Thanks for the lovely time
You took a swig of your sour beer
I took a sip of mine
There was no pause for fate’s applause
As you quickly probed my mind
And you quickly then decided
You were really out of time
To play out the quirks and niceties
Of a night of lovely lies
You are really something else
Vitriolic divine
Pessimistic know-it-all smile
And the unkind burnt out eyes
But it’s fine
I insist
I’m sure you’re just fine
Rushing home to your solitude
Metastatically dissatisfied
Unremarkable ineptitude
To see radiance when it shines
I thought I knew all flavors of my distaste
But this night was a nice surprise
Get home safe and best of luck (not really)
And thank you for the lovely time.
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