Challenge
Poetic Licence to Kill
Recent entries and comments sparked me again to sabotage my own poetry. So the challenge is to part write something poetic, but at appropriate times destroy its rhythm or rhyme. I found this challenging (it probably shows ha ha!) but it's a really good mental exercise to deliberately take yourself out of the flow!
Chaos
chaos is its own
Satisfaction for every child whose rival is disorder
there is One who cannot
Bear The Perfect Lines
And blinding symmetry of Fresh snow
and they must scrape a
stick through the mounds or relieve themselves (a dog but not perfect) to PROVE THEIR EXIS tence.
Nature
Who made Us
and the World
And The snow
Made a child to replicate her skill with patterns
~
Made a child to peel at those patterns like bark on a Tree
and reveal
Chaos is its own—
heronemistake
Oops!
—a child
[Sa-tis-facti-on}
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