Challenge
Emotion: Ambedo
n. a kind of melancholic trance in which you become completely absorbed in vivid sensory details—raindrops skittering down a window, tall trees leaning in the wind, clouds of cream swirling in your coffee—briefly soaking in the experience of being alive, an act that is done purely for its own sake
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Write short prose or poem expressing this emotion. Regardless of which on you choose it has to be expressed within 6 to 12 sentences ( prose) or lines (prose or poem).
I'll be doing four more of these challenges later. Thank you Thought Catalog for gathering these wonderful words. May the games begin!
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On the 18th of January, I'll be starting Nodus Tollens as my Emotion challenge.
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The raisin, like a whole landscape of ridges and valleys,
The smell like an orchard on the edge of your nose.
Powered water, pinprick hot, ricochets off your body; showered water.
Echo. Echo. Echo. Each step bouncing off the hall’s walls
As you stride through the atrium.
Thud-dump-thud-dump-thud-dump, hear your heart pumping faster
As your breath whooshes through your lungs like a metro train not stopping.
See the web, in the corner, hanging droplets clinging on
Like a chandelier of water suspended on a silken thread.
Deep inside, the answers have been waiting there for you,
Yet you ignored them; immersed outside yourself.
Look within; the answers lie within.