Challenge
Write Ugly
Whether its with choppy sentences, weird topic, or in your characterization/dialogue, write something ugly. I put in a lot of effort to make my writing sound good and feel rhythmic, making my prose almost poetic. I'm tired of it. Please write me something to inspire off-beat styling. Please tag @wabisabi, I'll be choosing the winner.
Ugly Love
She had that weird look all the time.
It was like her nose was squished to her face
My god she looked like a pig
But I didn't care
I loved her
She always had the most disturbing laugh
As if she was having a half seizure
It was more...choking than laughing
But I didn't care
I loved her
Something else about her...
She ran so awkwardly
Like some kind of duck
Except...the duck is disfigured
It always creeps me out
But I didn't care
I loved her
I'm not different then her
Ugly love
I only see her Beauty
Forget her looks
Forget her personality
Forget her past
I love her
And I don't care what she is like
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