Challenge
Write Ugly
Whether its with choppy sentences, weird topic, or in your characterization/dialogue, write something ugly. I put in a lot of effort to make my writing sound good and feel rhythmic, making my prose almost poetic. I'm tired of it. Please write me something to inspire off-beat styling. Please tag @wabisabi, I'll be choosing the winner.
A shattered heart
The glass shards in her chest twisted, and as they did pain tore through her body.
So this was what it was like to have a heart broken so thoroughly.
To have a heart that would never beat, never breathe, never feel again.
She scrambled to pick the shards off the floor where he had stamped on them.
They tore through her hands, and blood mixed with the reflected light.
So she walked away. They didn't want her to have a heart? Fine, she wouldn't have one.
Maybe they would beg as she broke theirs underneath her stilettos.
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*This is intentionally supposed to be written in a discordant/uglier writing style than my usual work.
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