Challenge
The Metaphor Challenge
Give me your twist on one of the following expressions: 1) "flirting with time"; 2) "beating a dead horse"; 3) "just us chickens"; 4) "tip of the iceberg"; 5) "once in a blue moon".
Write anything you want-- prose, poetry, dissertation, etc. Winner is whoever's got the most likes at the end. Tag me when you're done!
My Girlfriend
My girlfriend beats dead horses.
She slams her fists into their corpses,
Waiting for the sigh of breath
that never comes from lips of death.
My girlfriend punches corpse's sides.
Even as they rot, she plunges her fists inside,
Slamming knuckles through decaying skin,
Ramming into the bone within.
I don't know why she does it,
I just know I can't condone it.
My girlfriend beats dead horses,
Meanwhile, the only thing I can do
Is beat around the bush
And ignore the root of the problem.
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