Challenge
Critique Me
Submit any type of prose or poetry with the express purpose to have it critiqued and suggestions made to improve it or submit it somewhere for publication. If you are brave enough, critiques will be sent to you by private message. 250Word MAX.
City of Death
Paris, oh Paris
The city of Love
the city of Lights
Tell me your story
All blood and gory
Paris, oh Paris
Share your secrets
beheaded sleepless
dark below your
gilded domes
the thronged catacombs
Paris, oh Paris
Viking treasures
Stolen far away
Never heard in
the light of day
Paris, oh Paris
whisper to me
let me see
in the aurora
your plethora
of unknown hidden
Paris, oh Paris
I don't need
to look far
to find your
savagery
Paris, Oh Paris
City of Love
City of Lights
Leave nothing out
Paris, Oh Paris
The City of Death
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