Challenge
Hook Me! Part 2
Write an opening paragraph to a gripping book or novel! (I will not be judging the entries, but rather the winner will be chosen by who gets the most likes on their post)
Fall of the Heir
She was at the castle gates when he fell. She didn't know what she thought she could do; the man who slew him was a trained knight and she was only a maiden, skilled in prophetic arts but not much else. Deaf to the sounds of battle around her, she screamed his name. Jusak! Jusak! The soldiers parted at the sight of a woman—a girl, more like—and even the helmed soldier who had struck the killing blow paused. The thought struck her just as her brother took his final breath: I am now the Queen.
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