Challenge
Five Sentence Freakout!
The point of this challenge is to write a strictly five sentence horror/thriller story with your first sentence being: “Four minutes in and I knew I had made a colossal mistake.”
Notice: The sentence prompt count as your FIRST sentence, meaning you will write 4 more to complete the five-sentence-freakout. (Blatant run-on sentences will be a negative grade when judging these).
Have fun and Happy Halloween!
The Creature
Four minutes in and I knew I had made a colossal mistake. My legs are starting to give out, the sheer effort trying to keep myself squatting on the toilet seat is starting to become too much. My legs tremble in tandem with the slow, heavy footfall that’s getting closer to me, until a sudden bang alarms me. My foot slips and splashes into the cold water beneath me saturating my shoe and sock. My breathing to quickens and something tells me not to look up, but my body moves on its own and I’m paralyzed as I stare up into the emotionless dark eyes of the creature as it jumps into my locked stall, my screams breaking the silence.
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