Challenge
50 Word Mini Saga # 1: Open Genre/Topic
How good can you stun an audience with only fifty (50) words? Let's see. For this challenge, I’m looking for Prose only, any Genre, any Topic. Popularity will be considered, but I ultimately pick the winner and will read and comment on every entry! Please tag me @ChrisSadhill. Happy Writing!
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Hummingbird
Her presence filled the garden, encompassing my soul.
Like sunshine in spring, dewdrops on petals, the lightest of breezes - whispering, echoing along the winding path.
I paused, watching her fairylike approach, ever sure that the spin of the earth stopped in wonder, like the beat of my heart.