Challenge
November Drabble: NO THANK YOU
It's now Thanksgiving season, but let's mix this up a little. Give me a drabble incorporating the phrase "No thank you" in some way. Break it up. Use it all at once. Whatever. Just put "No" "Thank" and "You" in there somewhere. Wanna win? Here are the rules: Exactly 100 words using conventional spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Prose only. Poetry will be mocked, cussed, and set afire. I'll pick a winner sometime around December 2.
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Read this in an old-timey mobster accent
She was the type of gal you'd wanna get real nice with, get real close to. The kind where you wanna meet her parents and thank them. She danced low and slow to the ground like mist- no, like smoke. Her dark halo of curls stood stiffly as she meandered her way over to me. She moved like syrup sliding off pancakes.
"I don't recognize you, you with Tony?" she asked, the dim light glittering in her dark, molasses-colored eyes. Truthfully, I had no business in that dingy club. I was only there for her, the dame of my dreams.