Challenge
Two Sentence Challenge
Any subject, any style, as many commas as you want, just keep it at two (grammatically liberal) sentences.
Two Sentence Challenge
The rain poured down in torrents, drumming against the windows as if trying to break through, while inside, I sat motionless, staring at the flickering candle that seemed to hold the last shred of warmth in the cold, silent room. Every drop felt like a heartbeat, a reminder that the world outside was still alive, even if everything inside felt like it had stopped.
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