Try to depress me as hard as possible. Don't censor anything out unless it's for effect. Make whatever you write as long or as short as you want, just as long as I end up crying my eyes out. Points earned for sarcasm and tone of voice, but keep the plot logical so we don't end up with a vent in the middle of the Death Star that could fit a space ship and leads to the one weak spot. That's all it needs to be, depressing and logical.