Challenge
SCRYPT CONTEST: ELEVATOR PITCHES (read rules)
READ COMPLETELY! NO ORIGINAL PITCHES HERE!
This contest is an exercise in creating a one to three line pitch (also called a logline) for a movie that ALREADY EXISTS, for the sake of the writing exercise itself. The concept is to envision that you have found yourself alone in an elevator with a famous movie director. What is the one idea... the one sentence you will offer that encapsulates an entire production into a brilliant and intriguing one line before the door opens and they may escape.
1. Select a movie you love and know well.
2. Really, truly perfect a one line pitch for the movie. You have the option to create one pitch that is three lines long, or three pitches that are one line per... no more than that.
Keep in mind an excellent pitch is:
* told in the flavor or voice of the film itself (not usually of a character)
* usually conveys the core concept of the film or its unique premise or
* frequently is a broader supposition dealing with the universal truths presented by the film
* is so intriguing the audience (the director) MUST hear more...
3. Post the one line aside of a url to the MOVIE'S TRAILER for us to see.
4. Provide feedback to the other contestants... because this is for the sake of writing and building the confidence to know another area of the craft within script writing! Bonne Chance!
I am a professional screenplay analyst & writer that is moving into the literary world with my first book now completing entitled 'Phynics Forever Rising'. My CV resume: https://www.dgc.ca/cv_en/get/17243
Donnie Darko
Have you heard of Grandma death? Neither did I till I died a civilian, now idly-professed philosopher - a countdown is all that time was, and is. That bunny - we wear suits as the world crashes in the space-time continuum, as time is relative so am I within the limbo amongst my chaotic hemispheres.
Trailer: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=8wqVHjK2bQs
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Challenge
Write a short love poem. The catch is that the first sentence must have seven words, and the following sentences should countdown until you have only one word for the last sentence. Basically 7 words, then 6, then 5, etc.
Love comes in numbers.