Challenge
Write a sentence that is so vivid that the reader feels the emotion or sensation rather than simply acknowledging it.
Feeling it? (Pleasure)
Can’t catch your breath? Legs... Weak? Heart racing, fast, chest feelin’ like it’s burning? Is your head spinning? Are you dizzy? Feels like fireworks in your bones, like every time you move you might, slip? You feel the tingle down your spine? Your body doesn’t feel like it’s yours. It's fire or is it ice? Peppermint and the cold icy wind beneath your teeth. Firey... Giving you too much heat. Too strong? Yeah. That’s how it feels.
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