Challenge
This challenge can be a bit daunting so follow the instructions for what I call a Cryptic Poem.
Four lines only.
Second line must start with the last word of the first line ... Third line must start with the last word of the second line ... Fourth line starts with the word ending in the third line and must end with the first word of the first line ... Your title must be the first word which will also be the last word ... Make sure you tag me @Danceinsilence - in the comment box, not on the piece itself so I can read your work ... Also, if you can, have the first four words of each line form some kind of a message of thought ... There, now that shouldn't be too hard ... and let the fun begin.
Loving
Loving you has made me feel old.
old, like this endless ocean has no control over me now
now that I have found the shore, yet still lack the strength to let go
go forth into this sea. I don't know who I was loving.
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