Challenge
you.
I love the second person point of view because it is so universal: it could be anyone; it could even be ourselves. My challenge for you: write a piece of poetry or prose so ambiguous that the "you" could apply to anyone, everyone, or no one at all.
Longing
Your voice still echoes in my ears
somewhere around my heart
in the pit of my stomach
in my knees
pulsing on my neck
where the breath
of a kiss not given lingers.
Your voice still echoes in my ears
whispering softly
words you will never say
as your hands caress me,
your arms embrace me,
as softly, gently as the dream
in which they occur.
Your voice still echoes in my ears
with promises of love
that wasn’t and will not be
feeding a hunger
for the taste of lips that lie
with every breath
in the hollow echo of your silence.
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