Challenge
Metaphorically Speaking
Concoct a brilliant metaphor in under 150 words.
Imagine A Man
Let’s say he’s standing
on the blade
of an iron sword suspended
over a vast chasm -- at the bottom
wait jagged shards. The man
wears headphones and listens
to a recording of voices
that whisper to him, tell him
he commands a great army. But
perhaps that is too dramatic. What if,
instead he was covered
with something as simple
as a gray wool blanket.
Imagine, we walk around, each of us,
covered by these blankets.
We grumble how the dust makes it
tough to breath, and
we fantasize
about bigger eyeholes. Or
what if we just
sit here,
drink coffee on that bench
under the apple tree,
feel the mist rising
as leaves fall around us.
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