show, don't tell
so I kind of stole this from my english teacher but its an exercise we did in class today. Take these sentences: I was in the waiting room. I was nervous. And rewrite it by describing what is happening. If you want an example I posted one on my account :) Have fun!-I did
Show love, and let it speak for itself.
I’ll tell you but you wouldn’t believe me.
I’d kiss you but it wouldn’t describe
what I am feeling.
So I take you to your favorite restaurant and get down one knee. I ask you to marry me.
Because in the end I’m sure of one thing, that would be that you are the love of my life sweetie.
So I’ll show this with a Neo round-cut
You always used to tell me to Show my love and let it speak for itself.
Well here I am darling, waiting for an answer.
Show, don’t tell
but put this ring on your finger, and I’ll know.
Our love is real, and the bond is strong
till death do us part.