Challenge
Rewrite
Rewrite one of my pieces, from the oldest or the newest, into your style, a new perspective, or add something to it. Include what you choose to rewrite in your submission.
Broken (rewrite challenge)
I break and fight
I fight and break
no matter where I go
I am not whole
One day I will fight
Until I break
For nothing can fill
My empty soul.
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