Rewrite one of my pieces, from the oldest or the newest, into your style, a new perspective, or add something to it. Include what you choose to rewrite in your submission.

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Broken (rewrite challenge)

I break and fight

I fight and break

no matter where I go

I am not whole

One day I will fight

Until I break

For nothing can fill

My empty soul.

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