Challenge
break my heart
pretty self-explanatory; who can break it into more pieces?
Broken
I reached out my hand too late; and it felt as if something inside me had died that moment I saw them fall.
It felt as if I had been stabbed in the heart by a spear, and it crinkled like paper then shattered into a million peices like a window.
I sit, the glass peircing my inside as I stare forward in shock.
I let my outstretched arm fall to the ground next to my legs, and I could still feel my heart shattering like echos in a large cave.
That spear was peircing me still, and I still sat shocked as a dog that landed on all fours, choking on the cold air and my hands clenched the grass.
I hope you're heart got broken reading this, not really but I hope it was good,
and there are a lot of medaphores
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