The Chronicles
so a new story is on the way however I need this one hammered out. so I am wondering if I can have 3-6 people reply in the comment section. so that I can have some people be able to give feedback on how to improve this small piece. I don't really mind what is said as long as I can improve the story I will wait a week before posting it as I fix some last-minute things before posting. so again can I have 3-6 people comment down below so that they can read at least a little of the story so I can get some feedback on it? and how to improve. make it more understood. it feels like there is a break somewhere where it shifts drastically but I don't where.
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